tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5644877205641091430.post417107650848578552..comments2023-04-29T09:04:30.621-04:00Comments on Greetings from Nowhere: The house that Jack builtBarbara O'Connorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11772206568826059623noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5644877205641091430.post-58192418548691079682007-07-06T07:50:00.000-04:002007-07-06T07:50:00.000-04:00"too tied to the first part of the story" - I thin..."too tied to the first part of the story" - I think you hit the nail on the head.<BR/><BR/>Maybe we should try reading it backwards. :-)Barbara O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11772206568826059623noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5644877205641091430.post-12079813808615923582007-07-06T07:44:00.000-04:002007-07-06T07:44:00.000-04:00I'm a daily repeater, too. Gotta read the whole da...I'm a daily repeater, too. Gotta read the whole dang thing every time I sit down to continue...<BR/>I think this tends to make me too tied to the first half of a story, though. It starts to feel like every scene is a natural and inevitable extension of the one before. Then, when an editor offers feedback, I go, "Wha-?" <BR/><BR/>Jill EsbaumAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com