Ramblings about children's books (and sometimes some other stuff) from author Barbara O'Connor
Thursday, April 11, 2013
Things I Love Thursday
I love reading student writing.
From a fourth grade boy writing a paragraph that shows the setting of summer at the beach:
As the sun melted my face, I tasted the grains of salt sticking to my shirt. I saw green mixing with the orange, red, and purple to form the horizon. I hear schools of fish jump out of the everlasting water. I couldn't resist the urge to pull out my fishing pole and throw the sandy worm into the unknown.
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I love this!
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