Thursday, May 9, 2013

Things I Love Thursday

How can I not love this?

Writing by a fourth grade boy: a paragraph showing the setting of an attic in an old house--

Tip! Tap! was the sound he heard as he walked up the steps. He smelled the smell of the old things. He could taste the dust as he turned on the light switch. Click!

He saw the creepy boxes covered with cobwebs and spiders. "Eek!" he screamed as a giant bug slithered out of the smallest box and crawled toward him. Slowly, he walked backwards until the light flickered and then...blackness.

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